Onestar - ShadowClan

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[/i] seriously and won't tolerate any breaking of the warrior code. He tends to be rather aggressive towards cats of other Clans, especially the leaders. This anger is only worsened when other warriors are badmouthing his warriors or falsely accusing them of some wrongdoing. He's wise for his age but he tends to act before he thinks. He's a very passionate individual when it comes to something he cares about and, though he tries not to, often makes rash decisions when he gets to worked up. He's very dedicated to friends, family and loved ones. He will do almost anything a loved one asks of him, sometimes even if it includes breaking the Warrior Code.
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Onestar’s fur color is somewhat abnormal considering he lives in the Clan that hunts by night and darkness. It is short but very thick so he can keep warm in the winter. It is a bright snowy white with no hint of any other color. Because his fur is such a light shade, he likes to keep it clean since any amount of dirt or mud will stick out against the color. As a result, he is rarely ever dirty or ragged looking. That only happens when he gets especially busy, sick or just plain depressed. However, he’s learned to accept that, since he lives in the swamp, his paws will almost always be muddy. Don’t worry, he’s come to terms with it. The skin on his nose, the insides of his ears and paw pads are a soft pink and his whole body is marked with battle scars.
Word Count:: 149

::Eyes::
Onestar’s eyes are large and almond shaped. This makes him look a bit younger then he really is. His eyes are not very expressive and only really show emotion when he is feeling said emotion very strongly. They are a pleasant shade of amber that contrasts nicely with his pale fur and skin. The color is darker around his pupils and progressively grow lighter towards the edges of his iris.
Word Count:: 70

::Build::
Onestar is a large cat with a muscular build with very broad shoulders. His legs are a bit longer than average. Between the length of his legs and his muscular form, he’s an all around large cat. Not on an extreme level, but just a bit bigger than average. Now on to Onestar's claws. He earned his name Onetalon for a reason. On his right front paw, he only has one claw from an accident as a young warrior. He's rather proud of this deformity.
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History:

[/i] [LIVING]
FATHER:: GRAYFIRE [LIVING]
SIBLINGS:: DOVEFEATHER [LIVING][/right]

::Kithood::
Onestar was actually born with the name Whitekit. He was born to two ShadowClan warriors with a single sister, Dovekit. Their mother, Darkflower was pure black and their father, Grayfire was a gray tabby like Dovekit, so Whitekit was considered a sort of genetic anomaly. Nonetheless, he grew up like any normal kit, getting into the usual trouble and playing with his sister and the other kits in the nursery. Being the only kits in the litter, Dovekit and Whitekit grew practically inseparable. As is expected, they were made apprentices at the same ceremony.


::Apprenticeship::
Whitepaw was assigned a mentor that was rather strict. His name was Blazetail. He and Dovepaw trained side by side for the first few moons until Whitepaw started excelling in battle techniques while Dovepaw showed promise is hunting. They got on different training schedules and would often miss each other for days at a time. It was trying on their relationship, but near the end of the apprenticeship, they grew close again. Whitepaw even managed to stay rather close with his parents through the bulk of his training.

::Warriorhood::
Whitepaw received the warrior name Whitefire at the same time Dovepaw became Dovefeather. Since most of their time was free, the siblings started spending more time together and fully rekindled their relationship. Whitefire was out hunting on top of a boulder one day when he misjudged his leap. He started slipping off the rock and when he twisted to get a grip, his claws got caught on a crack on the boulder. He hung there for a moment before three of his claws ripped right out of his paw. One claw hadn’t got stuck as bad as the other three, so that was the only claw that remained intact. He was stuck in the medicine den for about half a moon until his paw healed and Dovefeather hardly ever left her brother’s side. When it finally healed, the leader decided that a better name for Whitefire would be Onetalon. The white warrior didn’t have a problem with it because in the same ceremony, he was given an apprentice, a small brown tabby she-cat named Fernpaw. Fernpaw and Onetalon became close friends over the course of her training and Onetalon discovered that he really liked having an apprentice. Even when Fernpaw earned her warrior name, Fernclaw, they remained friends. Even Dovefeather grew rather close to her brother’s apprentice.

Not too long after Fernclaw’s warrior ceremony, there was an attack on the camp. A large group of rogues barged into the camp and attacked any cat they saw. In the course of the fight, the deputy was killed and the leader’s last life was taken. The Clan panicked until the medicine cat stepped forward. She spoke of a dream she’d had the night before where there had been one star in the sky. Then more and more stars appeared, but only enough to take the shape of a claw in the sky. She believed that that meant it was StarClan’s will for Onetalon to take the leader’s place.

::Leadership::
Onetalon traveled with the medicine cat to Highstones where he received his nine lives. He returned to his Clan as Onestar and chose his deputy. That was only about two seasons ago, so nothing to major has happened yet and he still has all nine of his lives.
Word Count:: 556 words
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It looks splendid! =D
Accepted. ^^